hyper links/sources

1.http://www.finlit.fi/english/research/inventionofheroes.htmv
2. http://www.childhoodhero.com.au/news/story_05.asp 3.http://library.thinkquest.org/C001515/design/

Writers Moment

I am taking this brief moment to asses my strengths/weaknesses in my writing. First of all I will list my strengths. I would say that my strongest quality would be thinking outside the box. I(m very good at coming up with new ideas or expanding on already existing ones. Another strength is my personality. In writing sometimes you will have to gain information through outside sources. If this source is another human than you need to be able to connect with the real person not the front that they put on which is usually a greatly distorted.
My weakness is my writing itself i am a horrible speller and my punctuation is crap. this make the process of writing longer and more repetitive. If you have any ideas on ways to improve please let my know. but now its time for my to go.

FreeWrite persuasive essay

The world needs a real super hero. I not one on tv but one in real life it he/she would make the world a better placer. Its not really about the super powers a super hero has it is about the people that hero inspires to do the right thing. A hero would be there when needed and always have something inspirational to say. If I was a super hero I would spent my time instructing people on how to do the right thing first rather than running aroud punishing people for the doing wrong we never even explained the reason for not doing. everything is distorted in this day and age. For example Jesus probable didnt go aroud telling people if they didnt follow him and the way of god your going to hell. I would bet my life that he would have told you why its right to follow the word of god opposed to the reasons why it is not all right not to follow god. The context you should always shed light on in a subject is the positive side of thing not the negative. Also you should always go into an experieance looking for the lesson that it holds for you because it is not important weather you think it a good or bad experiance its the lessons that you learn that you take with you not the experiance itself.